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Agree with TarileFreak

Most of Newgrounds is 14-17 year old kids, so you can't go by them when they say "this was hilarious!! so funny". Your animation was good, but TarileFreak hit the nail on the head with a lot of things that could use some work. There were a lot of poorly written jokes, that while you may say fits the goofy style of humor you were going for, they come across more as lazy, with no real sense of purpose. (red suit joke). The trick to writing a good comedy is sitting down and writing out a script or screen play before animating. This way, even if the animation is bad, the writing and story is still solid. Fortunately, you did have pretty good animtion. Voice acting could use a lot of work (next time go on a forum and ask for multiple people to do voices for multiple characters. "hey guys, i need a really good black-guy voice for a character I'm writing up in a new animation I'm working on!").

All in all, not bad, but could use work. Keep at it though!!!

WhiteLightning responds:

What's with ragging on the Star Trek reference? I think a brief red-shirt mention is perfectly acceptable in a sci-fi short. I rewrote this thing multiple times as always, I think I varied my voice quite well for the ones I did, and the "black-guy voice" WAS done by someone else who's quite a talented and Newgrounds-renowned voice actor. If you didn't find the short funny, that's perfectly fine. Everyone's tastes are different, and I'm honestly pleasantly surprised so many people do enjoy it. But every part of the story was exactly as it was meant to be and was worked on vigorously, and I'd appreciate it if it was not chalked up to laziness because your preferences differ from my style.

I absoloutely loved this.

I've never heard this song before, and with that being the case, this flash definitely sparked for me. I love how smooth everything transitioned, and how well you made basically every part of the animation line up and synchronize with the lyrics of the song. This was very well made and I'm quite impressed. My suggestion to you, since it's so good, is since the Flash only takes up 3mb, increase the sound quality. In Flash, go to Publish Settings and click on the Flash tab. Depending on if the song throughout the flash is set to Stream or Event, click on the one in the tab that relates to that one. Make sure you uncheck 'Convert stereo to mono' and select something like 64KBPS and Best. Then just replace the file on Newgrounds. Seriously, it'll bump the score up on this thing a lot, and I'll watch it again in much more enjoyment. Great job on this!

Lankie responds:

Im glad you liked the song and animation!
suggestion wise I'll see if it'll improve it, ya see when I increased the quality to 32 kbps there a small amount of desync! I'd like to think sync is a little more important that sound quality but i'll give it a shot.

Extremely funny

Excellent animation, totally awesome sense of humor, great silly little plot, and all in all very fun. I'm really excited about this because it's been awhile now since I've seen a funny flash on NG. Very quality stuff. Original jokes. Favorite bit was the Gun-man scene. Great job on this, really.

FutureSmello responds:

Awesome, psyched you enjoyed it, thanks for all the compliments!

Gun-man totally makes this what it is.

Ugh am I getting too old for Newgrounds?

Fantastic animation. Very well made, clear voices. The characters looked great and like that of the Matrix. Everything looked good. However, I just don't find this funny. I appreciate the effort, looks great. However the jokes are so... unoriginal and... corny. Perhaps it is that I'm growing older and maybe this just appeals to a younger audience. I probably would have laughed my ass off at this 3-4 years ago.

Bobert-Rob responds:

Maybe? I dunno, maybe it isn't that great of a piece. I'm not SUPER proud of it, but it has its moments, mainly near the end. But to each his own, thanks for checking it out.

Lmao.

I'm getting really tired of reading "Haha this was so funny, that's the way it should of ended."

If it ended like this, you wouldn't have this parody. Which, my friend, is hilarious by the way, I really loved this, first flash that has cracked me up in awhile. Very, very funny.

Ockeroid responds:

Haha. I've just finished reading through all 444 reviews and I think 80% of them say that. Nice to find a reviewer who understands :P

Glad you enjoyed it :)

Haha, great!

Totally enjoyable. I really liked this. Awesome song. Haha, I love the solo part. Nice work!

vago187 responds:

Hell yeah! thanks man

Meh.

I've never liked this series, though I love your work. I find the jokes corny, unfunny, and slightly untrue. Maybe you can say I don't watch enough TV, but I don't really think Obama says "um" a lot at all. Of course the cartoon exaggerates it, but it comes from some truth of course, but I just don't know of that truth in the first place. The animation is always pretty good and the voices are clear. I just don't like the atmosphere of the cartoon, nor the political jokes or the unproportional political outlook on it.

Uhm..

i dont 1 2 make u angry but co... come on u can do better than thats so sorry but i dont 1 2 give u stars.

Same to you. Plus, it's want to. Not one to.

NemesisFrank responds:

ah thats ok but i was a litlle tire and im not a expert to create flash so i dont thinks its 2 abusif cuz what u telling me is true. thanks for the review and i have to tell u that my friends and i gonna make a serie i think ur gonna find this better.

Awesome!

You or whoever did most of the voices for this would be able to do the best Dane Cook impression.

Awesome movie, very funny. Nice one!

ImpendingRiot responds:

That would be LeftHandedSock

Very interesting!

That was a great animation, very interesting. It had a really nice style to it as well. Great job on this!

NOBU777 responds:

Thank you

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